Maybe my editing was too good for Sprite!

Today i did some more editing. Small changes, nothing too big. I tweaked the timeset a bit to make sure it fit the limit i had. I also addressed some discrepancies in cuts i used. I decided to change the music, though. It didn't really fit what i had in mind for it. I wanted a happy, cheery mood, but not too happy, as it kind of takes away from the commercial itself. I think people would focus on it too much, get thrown off by it. I also did a bit of cutting, and moving around of clips. I really liked how i put it together overall, though. I wanted to bring it all together, and here it all is! Music really ties something together and turns it into one. It was a bit hard to find the right track, though. I didn't find any good effects to use, unfortunately. Nothing really caught my eye. Well, nothing except the cool effects the people in the commercials do, but that takes a lot of time and money. I don't have much of either unfortunately (haha!) I tried to make it work to my best ability, in both my editing skill and my cameraman skill. I'd say i did a pretty decent job of both for my first time. Either way, that was about everything i did for editing. I really liked going over every single clip, finding that right shot, looking for the angles and how they all interact with eachother, and that kind of thing.